Bureau of Animal Welfare: Jill

Bureau of Animal Welfare: Jill

Advertising Agency: The Surgery, Victoria, Australia
Creative Director: Vito Tassone
Art Director: Keely Hackett
Copywriter: Ashley Rosshandler
Strategy Planners: Simon Hakim, Sophie Fredheim
Photographer: Hugh Peachey
Published: November 2007

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Yawn

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hmmmmmmmm i think this not cool

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nice idea and by nice i mean bad and by bad i mean missing

It took me forever to get this because of that &^*&%$ comma in the first line. If they mean Jill decided to stop feeding the stray and actually adopt it, then it should read "Jill stopped just feeding her stray - and decided to become its owner."

I thought copywriters were supposed to know how to write?

thanks teenie. i didn't get it till I read your #/!$!%/$#% comment... and you're right!!!
THAT LACK OF A COMMA OFFENDS ME.
Besides sorry but this is crap. Crap with a big C.

I'm a cat person.
I'm kinda getting this.
Kinda.

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

I can't help it - every time I read this I cringe. Worst, most badly written copy I have ever, ever seen on any ad that's not about selling used cars or by-the-hour call girls. Pitooie.

hm?

I don't know why they uplaoded this version, the final one that went to print doesn't have the comma...

What comma? I've seen it in publication and there is no comma. cool idea anyway