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Fidel's picture
Fidel
34 pencils

chrrrrrrrrzz..

tjb1970's picture
tjb1970
491 pencils

these are a disappointment. the pictures jump out at you and you want to read a compelling headline to drive the idea home. unfortunately, these all fall way flat. too bad. nice pics though.

Vicky's picture
Vicky
375 pencils

Looks like somebody lose his train of thougth, hahahaha!!!

Good pictures for me too...

theredm's picture
theredm
252 pencils

The pictures of these ads are great and at least this one has copy that follows the line of the train. Best of the lot but still needs refinement.

AriesDW's picture
AriesDW
172 pencils

I think this is a great attempt, this entire series, to try to add drama great art style to a topic such as that as trains. It is a good effort, considering most people find things such as transportation design boring. I, find it fascinating. However, I like these ads beyond that. I am not saying this is the best effort, I know this can be better but it is a start.

This version, however, is too try hard. You can easily tell the splash is photoshoped and there is no reference as to why it would be there in the first place.

postman's picture
postman
951 pencils

"Hey, I've got an idea! What about 'Er läuft und läuft und läuft...'? - Done. Hm. 'Seit Millionen von Kilometern lautet die Mission: Weiterfahren.' Good one?"

Vicky's picture
Vicky
375 pencils

I think the second one is the one...

Get-a-Fix's picture
Get-a-Fix
351 pencils

r u sure bout da translation?

Yokel's picture
Yokel
604 pencils

It's close.
maybe...
Since millions of kilometers the mission is: Keep driving. TRAXX locomotives from Bombardier.

the mighty ham's picture
the mighty ham
94 pencils

And the market for trains would be....? Like 3 people in the whole of Europe? I would have gone for direct mail.

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