Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
1636 pencils

The Layout is very clean, the butterworth cut out in the middle messed with my reading at first, congrats on getting on AOTW

atb2005's picture
13567 pencils

If you say "congrats on getting on AOTW" one more time, I will........lol You often say that.

Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
1636 pencils

lol, gotta end it on a positive

CuriousPencil's picture
4227 pencils

If you're going to delight your prospects with your textual flair, maybe invest in an apostrophe, or someone who knows where to use one. Apart from that clanger, there's the glaring layout caesura of the middle cut-out. But yes, congratulations on laying yourself bare on AOTW, and best of luck with what follows.

Boxey's picture
8885 pencils

It should read "...we couldn't care less..." Overall, I like the concept of the ad. The copy just feels like it was sent out early.

second_creator's picture
754 pencils

marks to layout


bhuvneshwar.chd's picture
991 pencils

beautiful execution.

"If you are irritated by every rub, how will you be polished?"
— Rumi

7h3o's picture
166 pencils

missing apostrophe. next.

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