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7h3o's picture
7h3o
Activity Score 166

missing apostrophe. next.

Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
Activity Score 1634

The Layout is very clean, the butterworth cut out in the middle messed with my reading at first, congrats on getting on AOTW

atb2005's picture
atb2005
Activity Score 13561

If you say "congrats on getting on AOTW" one more time, I will........lol You often say that.

Ron Burgundy's picture
Ron Burgundy
Activity Score 1634

lol, gotta end it on a positive

CuriousPencil's picture
CuriousPencil
Activity Score 4225

If you're going to delight your prospects with your textual flair, maybe invest in an apostrophe, or someone who knows where to use one. Apart from that clanger, there's the glaring layout caesura of the middle cut-out. But yes, congratulations on laying yourself bare on AOTW, and best of luck with what follows.

Boxey's picture
Boxey
Activity Score 8881

It should read "...we couldn't care less..." Overall, I like the concept of the ad. The copy just feels like it was sent out early.

second_creator's picture
second_creator
Activity Score 754

marks to layout

copywriter

bhuvneshwar.chd's picture
bhuvneshwar.chd
Activity Score 989

beautiful execution.

"If you are irritated by every rub, how will you be polished?"
— Rumi

7h3o's picture
7h3o
Activity Score 166

missing apostrophe. next.

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