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Grrrr's picture
Grrrr
1963 pencils

The visual's quite strong but the copy's strange. What are we advertising here? Copy, anyone?

sismo83's picture
sismo83
38 pencils

que?

Wrldtravler's picture
Wrldtravler
2 pencils

ignoring your elders -- don't do it!

Alistair C.'s picture
Alistair C.
692 pencils

wow, this is very good and touching! i love it.
for me it works just fine, but for others the copy could be a little more explicit.
though "shelter for the elderly" seems to be enough.

XTG's picture
XTG
1355 pencils

powerful!

mishkaa's picture
mishkaa
296 pencils

i want to believe it's powerful and touching but i can't feel it coz i can't understand what the visual is trying to say.....

Rabubi's picture
Rabubi
560 pencils

"Don't turn you back on old people" ?

AD1014's picture
AD1014
307 pencils

this is pretty nice, but the family tree thing is so familiar.

Kateter's picture
Kateter
2029 pencils

I like it.

edit: and 'get involved' would probably do it.

Jimmie's picture
Jimmie
127 pencils

Effective.

banane's picture
banane
54 pencils

?????

NatalieM's picture
NatalieM
1687 pencils

The imagery has a strong message.

scarfinati's picture
scarfinati
836 pencils

Great visual. but maybe the woman should be looking down as if in plea for help.

also it bothers me the top box is slightly bigger than the rest. looks like a mistake

-DaMontana-'s picture
-DaMontana-
118 pencils

but maybe the woman should be looking down as if in plea for help.

naaaaaa, even if she's alone and forgotten she has dignity

vote4pedro's picture
vote4pedro
4601 pencils

not a bad idea. but hard to like an ad based on an advertising cliche - the family tree.

daniel_glezmilan's picture
daniel_glezmilan
282 pencils

www.danielglezmilan.blogspot.com

POWERFUL VISUAL. MAYBE FOR AN ALZHAIMER AD.

december's picture
december
93 pencils

yeah the visual and the message are very powerful, if the copy is tweaked a little, that ad could be amazing

Angie-chan's picture
Angie-chan
61 pencils

nyaaa this is pretty, nice ad

cabron_tequila's picture
cabron_tequila
6 pencils

Very Good!

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
3900 pencils

This made me feel guilty.

That's the sign of a pretty effective ad.

"readthiswhileIstareatyourtits"

Doin' it for the points

pierrelastname's picture
pierrelastname
2869 pencils

Done ! for competition young creatives time ago... as a school book at the end of the year !
Nobody wanted to show the face, because the drugs...

kshitijsalve's picture
kshitijsalve
25 pencils

thought provoking. nice.

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