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GearboxMonday, June 15, 2009 - 14:21

If it were done with photographs of a real person, and the copy had subtitles on the photos reading "I lost my panther print suitcase" and a subhead near the logo saying "There's an easier way to explain", then this would look a lot better, but it would still take too much time to understand.

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GuestMonday, June 15, 2009 - 17:28

I agree, the drawing is crude and almost unfinished. It seems like a sketch idea that was chosen because of lack of time. It wasn't even refined or completed.

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shahidaliTuesday, June 16, 2009 - 01:59

agreed

shahid

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GuestTuesday, June 16, 2009 - 04:39

first idea and it looks like an airline ad

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just writeTuesday, June 16, 2009 - 05:22

i like the idea...

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GuestTuesday, June 16, 2009 - 08:17

I like the idea. And do you wann know why? Because you have to read the copy to understand it. A paradoxon i know.

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GuestThursday, June 18, 2009 - 02:27

Good ad.
Sure, the illustration looks crude...but so does a lot of other illustrations from high paid artists.