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SeanMartin's picture
SeanMartin

Well, that certainly makes the point loud and clear.

sneakyhands's picture
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sneakyhands

nice line.

Ucedaparker's picture
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Ucedaparker

Great. Nice and easy.

bluefish's picture
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bluefish

That made me laugh out loud, but I guess that is because I quit smoking :)))
Great job!

daydream's picture
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daydream

i saw this ad a year ago and i still think about it all the time. great line.

Goblin's picture
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Goblin

This is what i'm calling an ad!
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www.multimedia-stock.com

Martijn's picture
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Martijn

Wow, cool line!

theoneandtheother's picture
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theoneandtheother

this line is just perfect. fantastic job. love it

Blue Koala's picture
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Blue Koala

simple, clever
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Olafski001's picture
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Olafski001

that is a damn damn damn good line
me jealous now
well done paul

esteb's picture
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esteb

Gold Lion a few years ago, but still great.

How_Addy's picture
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How_Addy

A copywriter at his best.
Well done.

CGilb09's picture
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CGilb09

Great writing. I'm envious.

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keddy's picture
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keddy

Simplicity at it's best!

hard_core's picture
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hard_core

great job. I hate when someone does this. It makes me feel like an idiot. Super simple communicates everything and is effective. Great job! Did the client buy it?

j4son's picture
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j4son

great copyline.I quit

bill bernbach junior's picture
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bill bernbach junior

'yes, very good'

When the word gives you lemons, make volkswagens

RM's picture
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RM

Jeez and the art directors (why are there two if any at all?) take more credit than the writer!

Great ad

Adnomist's picture
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Adnomist

Smoking hot

h..m.mmmmm

shahidali's picture
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shahidali

hats off!

shahid

stitchy's picture
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stitchy

i ve never seen any ad with such great feedback...
great line...

Mukesh's picture
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Mukesh

great. I find it as simple, clear and effective as the Economist "I never read the economist" ad!

Mukesh Lekhwani

sparky's picture
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sparky

i really like it. my art director hates it.

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whitespace

he smokes, right? :D

pankajadsoftheworld's picture
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pankajadsoftheworld

verrrrrrrrrry goooooooooood

liar's picture
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liar

excellent. simplicity at its best.

hornet6868's picture
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hornet6868

it's nice, but a bit too similar to that ad done years ago... can't find it but it's a headline driven ad that says (something like this)

"Cancer cures smoking"

can anyone find it?

Wordnerd's picture
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Wordnerd

hah! great line (and who did it? 2 Art directors, no copywriter?)

Nolan's picture
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Nolan

Delicious copy. Love it.

@ Wordnerd:
Creative director is the copywriter ;-)

Wordnerd's picture
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Wordnerd

oh, right! thanks. Go, Paul!
(but still: 2 Art directors for this?)

Andy-B's picture
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Andy-B

hahahahhahahahhahahha. lol
Funny, I like......
ahahhahahahahhahahahahah

Andy-B's picture
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Andy-B

It's true when they say:
"In Advertising, Less is More" (Simplicity)
Very nice

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smilepig

very clever gooood

Kateter's picture
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Kateter

great.

snolet's picture
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snolet

Done.

(of course, not. I'm just a jealous guy)(I should say WELL DONE)

matks's picture
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matks

Great job. I thought there was nothing after "cancer cures smoking", but I was wrong.

Zeus's picture
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Zeus

precise and concise...GREAT COPY!!

luisrivera11's picture
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luisrivera11

cannes

vvhisky's picture
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vvhisky

yeah yeah good.. but no thanks, i like smoking

CGilb09's picture
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CGilb09

I liked it too. But hey, as long as you plan on continuing, at least everyone will already have their crying out of the way before your funeral.

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virtualplaydoh's picture
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virtualplaydoh

SMART. With a little bit of smart ass. Nice anti-smoking combo.

heterogeneous's picture
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heterogeneous

great love it

Creative Director

dlusion's picture
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dlusion

It's in your face and I like it. Bang on.

adguy2007's picture
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adguy2007

Brilliant... but why did it require two art directors?

vaoleo's picture
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vaoleo

Good Copy, great Idea

floydeepurple's picture
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floydeepurple

This is a masterpiece copy (and ad).

patUDAY's picture
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patUDAY

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Very well done. The simplicity is the best. And great copy.

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second_creator's picture
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second_creator

jealous!

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mumbai
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jeff.emmanuel's picture
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jeff.emmanuel

an AD!!!!!!!!!!!

Jeff

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Guest commenter

Muy buen copy , me deja mucho para pensar.

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Gold.

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parinaz

wow so simple but tells the whole story...

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wickedtintin
garotoxico's picture
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garotoxico

Increible copy! dios!!!!! me rompio la cabeza

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iswanda82

OMG..... i definetely quit now!!!

iswanda82's picture
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iswanda82

once a year there always gold-winning copy ad.... and this year it happens to be this one

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monika burns

let's learn how to write a copy...........

awesome!

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pencyl eye

WOw, this is sweet.

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WOW!!!! simply wow

rsan00's picture
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rsan00

toooooo good

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Guest

When I read that line, I almost quit... writing!
It deserves a new page in the Copy Book. Brilliant!

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Guest

When I read that line, I almost quit... writing!
It deserves a new page in the Copy Book. Brilliant!

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Guest

I never saw such an awesome response for an ad. That itself shows..That's it!

flurl's picture
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flurl

I don't want to be "that guy" but, really? A gold lion?

The line is undoubtedly cool, but is ultimately a rearrangement of 'smoking gives you lung cancer.' The same line that has tried and failed to achieve its goal, time and time again.

As a smoker, I recognise the cool play on words, then move on with my life. It doesn't even make me think twice about quitting.

The truth campaign did much more for smoking than this will. Great copy, nonetheless. Everyone loves a pun.

Boxey's picture
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Boxey

One of my top three lines of all time. Love it!

iambusy's picture
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iambusy

can it bring action...

busy.

fourwd87's picture
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fourwd87

it is surprising that one simple copy could be more effective than sophisticated artwork.
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