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ultraboon222's picture
ultraboon222
220 pencils

Whatever it's worth, these student ads are better than the product! Good art, ugly phone.

Too many cooks in the kitchen....

TJAY's picture
TJAY
64 pencils

Good art perhaps and ugly phone no doubt, either way I hope to god the copy has been poorly translated.

panasit's picture
panasit
687 pencils

Wow, really really beautiful art.
And the copy... I think it can be interpreted as bad, but for me, I think it's cute.

-Tung
--good idea is enemy of great idea

DA_COPY's picture
DA_COPY
50 pencils

I'm amazed. This is art.

SeanMartin's picture
SeanMartin

Okay, two things immediately come to mind: (1) there's no allowance for the gutter, which means part of your ad is gonna disappear into the binding, and (2) the headline is clunky in its grammar. There's no rhythm to it, which makes it difficult to understand at a cursory look. The illustration here is better than the "falling star" one, but the illustrator still needs to understand layout for these double-wides so the message doesnt get lost in the process of reproduction.

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