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Redemption of Sins, Salary

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December 2010
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Advertising Agency: Not Perfect | Y&R , Vilnius, Lithuania
Creative Director: Marius Lukosius
Art Director: Dziugas Valancauskas
Copywriter: Paulius Senuta

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RadoubleJu's picture
RadoubleJu
Activity Score 152

This guy seems to be awfully greedy. will anyone like him donate cutting some expenses???

Make it simple..

Church Money's picture
Church Money
Activity Score 76

Not sure I agree. The art direction doesn't seem to have anything to do with the content of the ad. More like the art director doodled on the layout and then they just went with it. The copywriting is okay, but I don't think this is the correct approach to get people to donate money to a charity. There are so many positive emotions connected with charities that clever cynicism like this seems to miss a lot of potential.

Galo's picture
Galo
Activity Score 446

It's okay if it's targeting Human Resources managers.

goranflr's picture
goranflr
Activity Score 259

I agree. I think the strategy here was about how to make an original ad instead of how to actually convince people to give. It really seems to be targeting Managers only. How about all the other people?
In the other hand, the art direction is very lazy. No intention to put some brain on it.
And, finally, I think the copywriting is nothing really interesting, it's not jumping to the next level.
In other words, it's a first idea, a first copy and an earlier-than-first art direction following a bad strategy.

MidasTouch's picture
MidasTouch
Activity Score 1024

Hm... The graphism is not bad but there is a problem with the tone to me...
Not sure a guy who fired people or took money for himself would appreciate a "life lesson"...
I don't know... Still, it's funny.

//usevertising v.s badvertising//
C'est une question de vie ou de mort.

pez's picture
pez
Activity Score 1802

c'mon!!!... what are we talking about?

charlottebree's picture
charlottebree
Activity Score 84

What do al the little scribblings have to do with it? And is it a question or a statement? Bad.

ace85le's picture
ace85le
Activity Score 3939

This is not out of the box this is lost in the jungle!

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RadoubleJu's picture
RadoubleJu
Activity Score 152

This guys seems to be awfully greedy. will anyone like him donate cutting some expenses???

Make it simple..

RadoubleJu's picture
RadoubleJu
Activity Score 152

This guy seems to be awfully greedy. will anyone like him donate cutting some expenses???

Make it simple..

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