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johann.s's picture
johann.s
112 pencils

terrible. there is hopefully something different that´s special about the product.

Vudu6's picture
Vudu6
81 pencils

Interesting thought, i think they could have pushed the execution a little more.

srahula's picture
srahula
16 pencils

I somehow dont get the concept even after pushing myself too far.
Would be thankful if someone could explain.

coronam's picture
coronam
162 pencils

You'll love the crackers so much that you won't be leaving any crumbs for the birds, causing pigeons to go hungry (oh the humanity!) ... or at least that's what I'm getting from it.

kre8's picture
kre8
989 pencils

i think it would have been cool if the pigeons were shown in 'situation'.
ie on some wires, on a fence, hanging around the streets...
but this, in a studio, looks forced and weak to me.
the idea though, is cool.

drunkard's picture
drunkard
113 pencils

I agree!... Idea is good ..but think again about execution.

xiv's picture
xiv
18 pencils

Clever idea, and I absorbed it quickly. But what ever happened to making food ads appetising? The bird is ugly and disturbing...
I don't think it will entice people into trying the product.

braindrain's picture
braindrain
240 pencils

Excellent point. I couldn't agree more.

hang-the-dj's picture
hang-the-dj
1262 pencils

If this was from a 12 year old, I'd still say 'try harder next time'.

MikeTV's picture
MikeTV
86 pencils

ummm

theassailante's picture
theassailante
234 pencils

needs better execution perhaps?
then again maybe it needs alot more than a good execution..

LEO_CREATOR's picture
LEO_CREATOR
51 pencils

ha ha ha......cool

everartz's picture
everartz
7611 pencils

i didnt like it.... visual i snot appealing!!! ew.....

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AdDavid's picture
AdDavid
406 pencils

similar concept was used for a mosquito repelent brand using frogs and lizards

addyhoch10's picture
addyhoch10
2592 pencils

don't show pigeons in food ads. pigeons are disgusting.

and this one's taking the biscuit.

Besha's picture
Besha
299 pencils

Poor bird! I don't like it!

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

so i guess birds only eat crumbs left from melba toast? at any rate, this ad made me throw up in my mouth a little at the site of this horrifying bird. i too think that showing this disgusting pigeon does nothing to enhance the wanting of the melba toast. an okay idea, executed badly.
blech.

addyhoch10's picture
addyhoch10
2592 pencils

maybe the idea implies that people will buy no other bread than this specific toast once they have tasted it.

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

okay. maybe. that's a great insight, one i'd like to see better executed than it is here though.

the_ashlands's picture
the_ashlands
1394 pencils

hmmmmm...interesting take....but then why arent the pigeons eating all the other brands of bread that apparently nobody else will consider eating? or did the pigeons get the melba bug too and now they refuse to eat any crumb unless its a melba crumb..?

ellehcimeo's picture
ellehcimeo
3522 pencils

if no one is buying the other brands of bread and crackers, the crumbs can't make it to the ground, thus the pigeon starves.
but i like your idea that the pigeon has the melba bug and won't eat anything else. that's a good twist too.
i'm really tired. please forgive me.

addyhoch10's picture
addyhoch10
2592 pencils

ok then let's just leave it as it is.
as i said before i don't want to see a pigeon in food ads anyway, no matter if it's skinny or as fat as they are in reality

aj's picture
aj
168 pencils

pigeons strave to death coz no one leaves even the crumbs to the poor birds?
the premise couldnt be more doomed! i hope there's still some trees and farms left around that place.

Skotte's picture
Skotte
24 pencils

when good ideas go wrong

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
1368 pencils

i think its brilliant, only because i came up with the exact same idea 3 years ago that was never sold. I did skinny ducks too. It was so difficult to show that as a visual to the client. Our line was, "Youll want to keep this for yourself"

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PaulyG_fill in ...
1148 pencils

My biggest problem is that by saying "you" in the copy, I thought that the message was geared towards the pigeon. I couldn't understand why the pigeon was so skinny if it doesn't leave a single crumb. Ok idea once I got it, but still, lousy execution.

RAZ21's picture
RAZ21
257 pencils

omg, this is nooooooooooooot a good thing to see....

jessicahoppe's picture
jessicahoppe
72 pencils

this is so mean and therefore funny.. absurdity and 'schadenfreude' yes!

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