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Dreaming's picture
Dreaming
Activity Score 50

school stuff,,,,,,.................!bt nice arrange

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strange,,,.....

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Guest commenter

i like

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entropiamonamour
Activity Score 65

School stuff.

Ed Mintone's picture
Ed Mintone
Activity Score 585

Nice catch

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kgeiger
Activity Score 7311

I agree.

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SKiZio
Activity Score 15

Great school stuff!!

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great one!

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SeanMartin

Okay. It took a few seconds to realize you were just re-arranging the letters to form the headline -- and were I just a casual viewer looking at this in a magazine, I wouldnt have bothered. The concept is there, but the execution is too dense and over-styled.

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Tina Dev's picture
Tina Dev
Activity Score 60

inat

Thanks, I did'nt make out the anagram.

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Shouldn't you change your name to God of Advertising?

I think that we all would love to see your amazing work so that we can praise you like you rightfully deserve.

Tina Dev's picture
Tina Dev
Activity Score 60

inat
I agree. But goodness grace be a little too wary of showering praises. I have my doubts that SM is too conceited.
Vanity comes before a fall. Let it not happen.

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Renan Correa
Activity Score 186

No.
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corre's picture
corre
Activity Score 196

it's true that it might take time for some to figure out the idea and that most won't be bothered.
but, having figured it out, I quite dig it. and plus, that makes me feel smart. who doesn't like ads that make viewers feel good about themselves?

Renan Correa's picture
Renan Correa
Activity Score 186

This ad is very, very good...but obly for his copywriter.
For me, as a reader, make me think: "ok, they figured out that their letter could be this phrase...ok."
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sneakyhands
Activity Score 1857

i don't think that this anagram is interesting enough for this to work. also, drawing the lines to solve it feels like its hand feeding the audience too much. maybe it's needed, but they might appreciate a chance to figure it out. also, for some reason i want to say 'tidy up your head' instead of the current line, but that has the connotation that the consumer is dirty minded. this is good thinking, but you're not there yet. i'd keep the tag, but try to get away from anagrams for a while and maybe something will hit you.

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Ok my resolve here would be to apply it to the connection you've made to avoid the contrived factor; have a waiter offering a tray up to an unhappy seated customer where the aspirin powder forms the lines as well as letters. I'm afraid to say that that will still leave you with not much more than a competent piece. My guess is you spent too much time trying to get into the space of cryptic twists. Look at insights, then stylize your art direction to re-inforce the thought:)

D. Droga.

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STRTLRS
Activity Score 1601

What the *#%! did you just say?

www.storytellerscreative.com

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He said he's an idiot no-talent hack ass-clown.

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whitespace
Activity Score 1953

Wow.

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STRTLRS
Activity Score 1601

This is just too forced and honestly not very pleasing to the eye. Shame on you Mr. Art Director for adding drop shadows to strokes. That's a no no.

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superb!!!

whitewhite's picture
whitewhite
Activity Score 251

good work dear. Applause to copywriter

JORDI's picture
JORDI
Activity Score 96

Interesante, aunque no hace falta ser tan cutre pegando las letras. Y con el papel tan amarillo da un aire bastante sucio que no le conviene en nada al producto.

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miko1aj
Activity Score 3086

great work. It's definitely NOT usual school thing.
clap clap.

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ahpitt
Activity Score 342

Yes, I can feel the pain.

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not one comment on the poor type choice for "tidy your head up"? Khaki should be thrown into the ocean with comic sans. this ad is just grunge for the sake of grunge, i dont get the connection other than the art director drawing lines for me, its too forced.

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carljoshua
Activity Score 7

clever

capywriter's picture
capywriter
Activity Score 5509

good idea, I saw it immediately. Nice one!

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des4graphic
Activity Score 282

Its nice

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Dreaming's picture
Dreaming
Activity Score 50

school stuff,,,,,,.................!bt nice arrange

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