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ColishMonday, October 4, 2010 - 17:35

Student work. Study more.

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GuestTuesday, October 5, 2010 - 03:15

if you think so you should tell STUDENTS what they have done wrong, so they can learn....

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GuestTuesday, October 5, 2010 - 03:28

Colish, If you hadnt seen it was from an ad school, you wouldnt have known the difference. In my opinion the ad is confusing with what it tries to comunicate, a little bit of a copywriting is needed. But anyway, this execution has been done to death already. As a starte http://www.coloribus.com/adsarchive/prints/renfe-trains-field-12451955/

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HappyHourTuesday, October 5, 2010 - 12:31

STUDENTS: Do not listen to Colish. Studying will do nothing for your advertising career but confine your mind to what's already been thought. Think and do!

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GuestMonday, October 4, 2010 - 18:50

nice and simple.

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ChrisMonday, October 4, 2010 - 20:23

nothing new.

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Anonymous AuthorMonday, October 4, 2010 - 21:00

Could be excellent.

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atb2005Monday, October 4, 2010 - 22:16

Copy is good, art is so so.

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GuestWednesday, October 6, 2010 - 00:15

Ok, the idea is about how Amtrak reaches everywhere. Fine, but what are the vertical bars for?

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GuestWednesday, October 6, 2010 - 07:30

its a beautiful idea : ) I love it. people please comment don't judge. it's nice piece of work.

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wangqianlvllWednesday, October 27, 2010 - 04:40

漂亮,富有创意,喜欢~学习了