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CuriousPencil's picture
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CuriousPencilWednesday, March 14, 2012 - 18:11

Dry, unappetising idea; maybe it's just me, but if you're selling food, it's probably a good idea not to make it look like other food. Especially when what you're selling is dry and uncooked, and what you're comparing with is crispy and dripping. This is a fine slide for a biology class, with copy to match, but I don't think it works.

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kleenexWednesday, March 14, 2012 - 18:45

I like both ads.

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CuriousPencilWednesday, March 14, 2012 - 18:50

Damn, I'm having one of those 'am I being too literal?' moments now.

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pierrelastnameWednesday, March 14, 2012 - 21:41

zzzzzzz

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HadronsThursday, March 15, 2012 - 01:53

It's clever, but not effective. There is some truth to the dry words from the Irishman.

THERE'S NO HEAVIER BURDEN THAN A GREAT POTENTIAL

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fadirahhalThursday, March 15, 2012 - 03:12

smart but so flat.

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MicheleVirgilioThursday, March 15, 2012 - 05:19

i like it, simple concept

http://www.mandarinoadv.com

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ace85leThursday, March 15, 2012 - 06:34

The shape isn't very obvious in this one. Other ones are better.

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bobby666Thursday, March 15, 2012 - 06:53

simple yet effective... good

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imagineitThursday, March 15, 2012 - 07:59

really like these! so simple and so great! Wish I was doing work like this!!

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bate_palmasThursday, March 15, 2012 - 08:25

I especially like how they've pluralised protein :)

It's not rubbish. Not exciting, but at least the audience will get it.

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CuriousPencilThursday, March 15, 2012 - 08:29

There are a lot of different protein types; they pluralised correctly: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_proteins

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bate_palmasThursday, March 15, 2012 - 08:40

Fair enough. I stand corrected.

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observant vickyThursday, March 15, 2012 - 08:51

I don't think I need proteins.

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mark3rThursday, March 15, 2012 - 11:46

Works for me.

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cannes_lFriday, March 16, 2012 - 06:50

like this

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AlexisgFriday, April 6, 2012 - 05:38

Very wrong idea. It symbolize the legumes with the fat of the steak