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Guest's picture
Guest

Good ad. It's not necessary to improve the line. Just delete it. The pic says it all.

Flurb's picture
Flurb
Activity Score 263

I like it. But I think it would be stronger as "Bad breath is unforgivable." But maybe that's just me.

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missed my turn
Activity Score 426

good call on the line change. either way, this is awesome.

LeeHarvey's picture
LeeHarvey
Activity Score 3045

You're DAMN (sorry) right Flurb! Nice ad.

STRTLRS's picture
STRTLRS
Activity Score 1601

Unforgiving is correct since it's the priest doing the talking.

Don't just look, observe.

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Joseph maguire

That's a fantastic ad. Great art direction better delivery. Great work. In essence the only thing that I didn't like is that the audience has to be assumed to believe in confession. But that aside it makes sense and even though it caters to a specific audience.

matks's picture
matks
Activity Score 476

Yeah, but it's a Brasilian ad. Most of the audience are Roman Catholic.

theanc's picture
theanc
Activity Score 2783

Not brazilian. But OK I know what you mean.

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oopsie_dum_didly
Activity Score 91

Jealous.

Losvanvan's picture
Losvanvan

A ver tengo el brief y q es lo primero que se me ocurre?
Ya se q la gente se aleja de mi!!!!
Primera idea y pocas ganas de pensar diferente!

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Guest commenter

really? how great? very old idea just nice art

Senhora Kolossa's picture
Senhora Kolossa
Activity Score 483

bbdo? wtf?
aotw? wtf?
this ad is embarrassing like when the cow comes home!

john doe's picture
john doe
Activity Score 1571

Bad line. Boring idea.

troika02's picture
troika02
Activity Score 212

great work with the art direction. very good treatment.

Guest commenter's picture
Guest commenter

its not bad, but wouldn't like to see it in any annuals.

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Guest commenter

Could have been done 10 years ago, looks like a late 90's ad.

Motillium's picture
Motillium

Bof...
maybe with curtains closed...

Guest commenter's picture
Guest commenter

BOf...
Maybe with curtains closed... maybe

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Guest commenter

Maybe with curtains closed...

mark3r's picture
mark3r
Activity Score 1949

This is a very exquisite ad. Nice job.

DJVassallo's picture
DJVassallo
Activity Score 243

wouldn´t have been better to go further... like throughout the cubicle´s curtains or net... maybe looking priest puzzled face behind....

Guest's picture
Guest

Good ad. It's not necessary to improve the line. Just delete it. The pic says it all.

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