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snackwell's picture
snackwell
Activity Score 3

Criticism however negative can and should be used to better creatives. If you can't take it then don't put your art out there. But let's talk about this Road to Success...
First the Red carpet path starts at a slant yet the base of the stantions are level and freak oval. reflected light in those stantions is not indicitive of the fictional source light. Eagle: un-matched lighting, quite gaggy and not the same resolution as anything. Wolf: bizzare melting paws. why does he have snow on fur? Orca: disproportionate size by a long shot as compared to the 'abominal snowman' . Everyone knows orcas are bigger than snow creatures, and again, unmatched lighting. if it were couldy then the fill light would be shadowy and less clean. Other topics could include drop shadow on the volcano under a smokey sky -why?
But I have to go now. This to me looks like an ad to get young students to come to a photoshop animation class or to join the US Marines.

A decent idea/campaign that was approved by a novice team.
AND then the ad at the bottom to "learn to make ads like this on Creative Pro." Ironic

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Jaap Grolleman
Activity Score 6992

Considering it's an ad for a communication award, it's surprisingly bad at communicating. I know that the path to success is long and difficult. What's the new insight? And how does it relate to this event?

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CuriousPencil
Activity Score 4225

I think it's an award for wasting 3 weeks on postprocessing a hungover idea where an eagle gets its arse torn off, a whale somehow jumps with 2 metres run-up and an imaginary judge clubs spiders who make it up a blood-red carpet. Though I've been wrong.

[Edit]. Oh. I was wrong. There was a spare volcano. And an angry wolf. It's Pokemon for the Brazilian advertising community.

surecreator's picture
surecreator
Activity Score 31

okie.. i understand this thing for success n all .. but what is there to achieve? i cant understand that...

LeeHarvey's picture
LeeHarvey
Activity Score 3045

"Nutslocomotyva". What kind of name is that? But then again, what kind of awful photoshop is this! Worst thing I've seen here in a while.

Guest's picture
Guest

The line should go "The path to success is all about luck" you get to see a bald eagle up close, as well as a killer whale

MichaelJohnJ's picture
MichaelJohnJ
Activity Score 38

How the hell can anyone get passed that wolf? He seems fierce...

jackblack's picture
jackblack
Activity Score 2355

Meh.

Guest's picture
Guest

Nice visual! I like that vulcano... :)

reasonwhy's picture
reasonwhy
Activity Score 147

I like the idea, even if i can't really see where is the success in the visual.
But very bad photoshop .

reasonwhy's picture
reasonwhy
Activity Score 147

The path to sucess is easy with a gun.

TiltedChairCreative's picture
TiltedChairCreative
Activity Score 513

Portfolio I concept, bad photoshopping and Harry Potter font. Recipe for disaster.

Guest's picture
Guest

Well done!!

keppler's picture
keppler
Activity Score 27

I like it too

J.V.'s picture
J.V.
Activity Score 6

Very good.

Liz01's picture
Liz01
Activity Score 28

wow

flaviomedeiros's picture
flaviomedeiros
Activity Score 32

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Guest's picture
Guest

Love it!

Jon-Paul Mountford's picture
Jon-Paul Mountford
Activity Score 890

Oh, My...this is shocking, and not in any good way.
Who is this aimed at ??? people who spend all day defeating bad guy's in video game world.

Surely it must be a students (first idea) attempt at an advert for a game.
the horrid, horrid, horrid (yes it needed three) comping is so cack and ham fisted that I'm awed with disbelief that this snuck past quality control, was there any Q.C. ?
did someone get a pay check from these two ads, makes me want to confiscate peoples software until they're able to show themselves as having some ability.

is their any way to give minus stars? -5 at least

ticomoraes's picture
ticomoraes
Activity Score 2

Hi Jon-Paul... First of all, I respect your position and your opinion. Everyone must have one. But, I think, you should have some respect with other´s work. It´s a shame to you (I think) use so destructive words. You have a great work but using this language it seams that you haven´t. Also, as a photographer/supplyer you should know how to treat your clients and potentials one, and you´re being disrespectful, also, the creative team of the agency. Anyway... to bad to see how a high "professional" can go down.

Best regards,

Tico Moraes (NutsLocomotyva)

snackwell's picture
snackwell
Activity Score 3

Criticism however negative can and should be used to better creatives. If you can't take it then don't put your art out there. But let's talk about this Road to Success...
First the Red carpet path starts at a slant yet the base of the stantions are level and freak oval. reflected light in those stantions is not indicitive of the fictional source light. Eagle: un-matched lighting, quite gaggy and not the same resolution as anything. Wolf: bizzare melting paws. why does he have snow on fur? Orca: disproportionate size by a long shot as compared to the 'abominal snowman' . Everyone knows orcas are bigger than snow creatures, and again, unmatched lighting. if it were couldy then the fill light would be shadowy and less clean. Other topics could include drop shadow on the volcano under a smokey sky -why?
But I have to go now. This to me looks like an ad to get young students to come to a photoshop animation class or to join the US Marines.

A decent idea/campaign that was approved by a novice team.
AND then the ad at the bottom to "learn to make ads like this on Creative Pro." Ironic

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