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sush's picture
sush
Activity Score 564

yep dis is lovely, very good.thumbs up.
its easy to understand esp if u knw d product but i tink a few line wud mak it work best.kudos

sue

Boccioni's picture
Boccioni
Activity Score 149

Well done, could work nicely as an environmental ad for eco friendly soap. Not a fan of the picket sign headline.

Guest's picture
Guest

This one is forced. I can't think of a garment that looks like this.

Guest's picture
Guest

Its made out of a few garments.

TRICKY's picture
TRICKY
Activity Score 3954

beautiful campaign -kudos-

The man who stops advertising to save money is like the man who stops the clock to save time

goree's picture
goree
Activity Score 37

excellent campaign. Superb art direction.

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NastyJester
Activity Score 740

I love the campaign, and I'm guessing it's for Persil's eco friendly detergent... in which case my only comment would be to spell it out a little. I know Art Directors hate copy, but a small line explaining why the product is environmentally friendly might rid some of the confusion.

Saying that, if it's not for eco-friendly detergent, then I don't like the idea as much.

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CopywriterInTraining
Activity Score 162

I don't think it's forced at all, the point is not to make it look like a garment. It's to show that the care of a garment (with Persil) won't have a negative impact on the environment.
Well done.
And I agree, it could use a quick line about the eco-friendly element.

sush's picture
sush
Activity Score 564

yep dis is lovely, very good.thumbs up.
its easy to understand esp if u knw d product but i tink a few line wud mak it work best.kudos

sue

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