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Pedestrian's picture
Pedestrian
492 pencils

The copy in this campaign could use a little work. "Blank. Blank. Repeat." is a formula I gave up using when I was an intern.

"Less Oxygen. More air." nails it. But that's about it.

sirvan's picture
sirvan
29860 pencils

Right on, right on.

+++

"I love some things, and don't love some other things."

Boxey's picture
Boxey
8881 pencils

Lazy copy on this one, guys.

CuriousPencil's picture
CuriousPencil
4225 pencils

Best in a crummy series.

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