BBC Scotland: Scotland's History, 2

Advertising Agency: Family, Edinburgh, UK
Creative Directors: Kevin Bird
Art Director: Kevin Bird
Photographer: Simple Photography
Retoucher: Simple Photography
Copywriter: David Isaac

12 comments

Guest's picture
Guest

Hmmm...

Guest's picture
Guest

nice layout but too forced...

Jon-Paul Mountford's picture
Jon-Paul Mountford
889 pencils

I want to like this. but there's just something about the execution that feels really forced. I think it's the 'S's that just don't quite sell it.

www.jpmountford.com

Guest's picture
Guest

too much?

Gi_bo's picture
Gi_bo
1385 pencils

Yes. The intention is realy nice but certain details seem forced ("S", "N" etc..) if it were all more natural it would have been great.

GiBo

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
3900 pencils

Really lame, sorry.

It's put together nice (like a prostitute) but underneath the glossy veneer lays nothing more than a haggard old idea that's been used more times than Drunk Daves sister. Ha!

Sorry Dave....it's just been a while.

Hi-5?

"stay low, move fast"

Doin' it for the points

Estiboy's picture
Estiboy
18 pencils

It is maybe forced, but i still like it

rooster_nl12's picture
rooster_nl12
36 pencils

This for me would really work in an animation where the rock formation would form as words, once it is in perspective.

however as a still it is too forced

alnore's picture
alnore
212 pencils

this is the only one in the series that make sense,
the others are made up REAL BAD. for this.

-all balls, no brains-

Guest's picture
Guest

its good but i think there is something missing.....

BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON's picture
BOOBJOB LOOBCANNON
1838 pencils

Standing stones? Uniquely Scottish?!?! Stonehenge?!?!?!

Guys, get back to the drawing board, and throw away the 1970's advertising book you're using. A tired old formula, poorly thought through and badly done.

If this is the sort of poop you're pedaling you must be in trouble.

We're going to need more lube.

Srivatss N Iyer's picture
Srivatss N Iyer
121 pencils

good work

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