I understand it might be a slow day, but please don't dredge up lame student work from the exhibition forum... The overall look and feel of this ad is a cleveland steamer on my chest compared to real Apple ads. The copy is bad, the visual is weak and boxes in the clausterphobic tag in the bottom right corner. The guy didn't even bother cleaning up the center of the CD! I held my tongue when this was in exhibition, but this kind of slipshod work is unacceptable in the archive.
oooo... oh my oh my... i like the idea but the excecution and photoshoping is letting this one down! big time... copy also needs work... sho... good idea though
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Not with copy, you don't.
Yeah the copy makes absolutely no sense.
It makes enough sense to be wrong.
And where is the product?
The iPod touch is a pretty sexy bit of kit. Stick it on the poster if you want people to not call you names and throw poop at you.
Doin' it for the points
And be bothered to cut the middle of the CD out!
What are these anyway? They're not real Apple ads are they?
every aspect of everything needs work.
It MUST be a student. Look at the middle of the CD (along with everything else that is wrong with this).
You have to hate advertising in order to truly love it.
Ivan, why is this here?
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good question.
Why is this here?
Don't mean to be super negative, but these are at best, rough ideas with basic visuals.
Doin' it for the points
Sorry, if you don't think they belong. I'm always trying to be selective.
This is horrible. Nothing is working, the visual sucks and whoever set the type needs to take some refresher typography courses.
Old school and too bad
I understand it might be a slow day, but please don't dredge up lame student work from the exhibition forum... The overall look and feel of this ad is a cleveland steamer on my chest compared to real Apple ads. The copy is bad, the visual is weak and boxes in the clausterphobic tag in the bottom right corner. The guy didn't even bother cleaning up the center of the CD! I held my tongue when this was in exhibition, but this kind of slipshod work is unacceptable in the archive.
terrible art
Blech. Who's "I" anyway?
Thing. (a.k.a. the hand, lol)
i believe this was way back then, referring to the 2nd gen iPods which had touchy wheels.
the middle of the CD is embarrassing
no, this is painfully recent http://adsoftheworld.com/forum/exhibition/apple_ipod_touch
holy shit, this is bad.
keep your dayjob, kiddo.
should've been an april fools joke..
Not even worth commenting on,seriously.
What happens in between Award School...and that first job.
Hang in there, bro!
>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.
lol@ award school
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Unbelievable lame.
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scam!
god i love de old east European translator... its so EurovisioN.
oooo... oh my oh my... i like the idea but the excecution and photoshoping is letting this one down! big time... copy also needs work... sho... good idea though