Apple iPod touch: DJs

It's gonna get very touchy.

Art Director / Copywriter / Photographer: Lee
Released: 2008


Braveheart's picture
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Not with copy, you don't.

pretty good's picture
pretty good
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Yeah the copy makes absolutely no sense.

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
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It makes enough sense to be wrong.

And where is the product?

The iPod touch is a pretty sexy bit of kit. Stick it on the poster if you want people to not call you names and throw poop at you.

Doin' it for the points

benjaminbrown's picture
439 pencils

And be bothered to cut the middle of the CD out!

What are these anyway? They're not real Apple ads are they?

TrainRunner's picture
225 pencils

every aspect of everything needs work.

EGGO's picture
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It MUST be a student. Look at the middle of the CD (along with everything else that is wrong with this).

You have to hate advertising in order to truly love it.

bknowlden's picture
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Ivan, why is this here?

Disco Munky's picture
Disco Munky
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good question.

Why is this here?

Don't mean to be super negative, but these are at best, rough ideas with basic visuals.

Doin' it for the points

ivan's picture

Sorry, if you don't think they belong. I'm always trying to be selective.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

Pogi5's picture
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This is horrible. Nothing is working, the visual sucks and whoever set the type needs to take some refresher typography courses.

Vicomte's picture
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Old school and too bad

nice gaijin's picture
nice gaijin
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I understand it might be a slow day, but please don't dredge up lame student work from the exhibition forum... The overall look and feel of this ad is a cleveland steamer on my chest compared to real Apple ads. The copy is bad, the visual is weak and boxes in the clausterphobic tag in the bottom right corner. The guy didn't even bother cleaning up the center of the CD! I held my tongue when this was in exhibition, but this kind of slipshod work is unacceptable in the archive.

sumbody's picture
136 pencils

terrible art

teenie's picture
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Blech. Who's "I" anyway?

cheza's picture
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Thing. (a.k.a. the hand, lol)

dangerdude's picture
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i believe this was way back then, referring to the 2nd gen iPods which had touchy wheels.
the middle of the CD is embarrassing

nice gaijin's picture
nice gaijin
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krautland's picture
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holy shit, this is bad.
keep your dayjob, kiddo.

j4son's picture
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should've been an april fools joke..

Not even worth commenting on,seriously.

Rog's picture
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What happens in between Award School...and that first job.
Hang in there, bro!

>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

BrownSugar's picture
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lol@ award school

jsptrck404's picture
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no. bad dog.

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BogusTrumper's picture
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Unbelievable lame.

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notcaslon's picture
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god i love de old east European translator... its so EurovisioN.

Guest's picture

oooo... oh my oh my... i like the idea but the excecution and photoshoping is letting this one down! big time... copy also needs work... sho... good idea though

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