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justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
1368 pencils

clever concept, bad art direction.
You dont need the guy on the right looking up like that, its too slapstick.
I would have preferred seeing the van as a packshot at the bottom of the press ad, its too forced on the list. No one puts a picture of the van on those lists.

Heads's picture
Heads
194 pencils

I thought excatly the same!

amelossi's picture
amelossi
168 pencils

Good idea without art direction.

NITROXROX's picture
NITROXROX
79 pencils

Its ambient media, not a press ad.

qiongyong2233's picture
qiongyong2233
34 pencils

ha ha ha nice ,good idea

rithwick's picture
rithwick
14 pencils

hi ,
i too think this is an ambient idea.
but would it have been better if he had one big board ith all thier names and
wore the Volkswagen branding on his back.

that would have been less forced.
what do you guys think?

lara's picture
lara
114 pencils

well i think its a nice idea n rithwickis also right in that way it would have been lukin real

LAZ's picture
LAZ
288 pencils

as ambient, this is brilliant.

squirrely's picture
squirrely
316 pencils

Why is it all typed? Just have one guy with a big peice of Bristol board and all the names hand-written (get rid of the other guy).

Maybe a line at the bottom that says "Room to spare" or something like that (just to play to the lowest common denominator).

thecharles's picture
thecharles
104 pencils

Agreed, good concept, could have better execution

popdistortion's picture
popdistortion
1594 pencils

Love the idea. Hate the execution.

JELLYGOOSE's picture
JELLYGOOSE
88 pencils

I don't wanna be repatative but I guess I'll be...very good idea with a bad execution.

mostlatest's picture
mostlatest
38 pencils

The man also carries the picture of the car he is driving? Makes sense?

justpassingby's picture
justpassingby
1368 pencils

Ivan, if this is an ambient maybe you should mention it. People including myself are judging it as an ad.

ivan's picture
ivan

It is tagged as ambient. It may be too small to see, but it is there in blue under the title.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

thoainguyen's picture
thoainguyen
78 pencils

haha, because u justpassingby so you dont get it as an ambient :)

get_tune_with_me's picture
get_tune_with_me
66 pencils

Good one

Mo's picture
Mo
648 pencils

It better be an ambient.

drizae's picture
drizae
503 pencils

Might look better as a print.

Fail Harder.

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