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Bravo Azat!!!

Jimmie's picture
Activity Score 127

This looks like a brochure, not adv.

Abraham.Gulf's picture
Activity Score 14

It's DM jimmie...

Although I'm pretty sure a goodyear outlet's waiting room doesn't work the same way as a doctor's waiting room.

Why would anyone wait for tyres anyway?

"ITS EASIER TO GAIN THE ATTENTION OF CURRENT CUSTOMERS" come on guys, you're preaching to peers... peers who still don't know what brand their car runs on.

"RESULT: CUSTOMERS WERE CURIOUS ABOUT IT" -- really don't buy that one. Good attempt, but not really very aweinspiring...

krautland's picture
Activity Score 3216

a dart disk made to look like a tyre is cool. the way you laid it out here doesn't get me to recognize what you're doing right away though, so I'd work on that a bit. perhaps add the circular outlines (twenty points here, thirty there) onto the disk to make it a bit clearer, but as I said ... good idea.

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pretty good
Activity Score 364

I really like this. Well done.

but_why's picture
Activity Score 280

I like it too. It totally works. Don't need to over cook it with all the points and making it look like a dart board etc - it's a bit of tyre not a dart board - keep it simple I reckon.

capywriter's picture
Activity Score 5509

I don't think you should add anything to the darts board itself (or maybe just the centre, you know, the little green circle with red centre...), but I would definitely work on the way you presented it here, it doesn't sound very credible (for sure if you think of entering this in any award contest)

'Many customers throw darts to the board, then see the logo and read our claim...' You really don't have to explain how it works, or at least not with the exaggeration in the beginning: 'many customers'... Feels a bit forced. Apart from that, have it checked by a translator, spelling and grammar could be better...

Nice idea by the way.

Nanel's picture
Activity Score 283


RM's picture
Activity Score 419

I like the idea, but why invent a tyre that once punctured stays on the road longer. This is only detrimental to the tyre company, it means they will sell less tyres - which means less profits, and a smaller ad budget!

It's your funeral goodyear!

Pieter Decanniere's picture
Pieter Decanniere
Activity Score 22

Hope you never crash your car because of a punctured tyre; The product saves lives; That seems a good old USP to me.

Rog's picture
Activity Score 6082


>>>> That's not an ad. THIS is an ad.

chinaski's picture
Activity Score 951

good job.

nilay tuncay's picture
nilay tuncay
Activity Score 2

Well done, fellows... Keep up the good work!

Wheelspin's picture
Activity Score 44

Take Krautland's advice on the presentation. Good idea, anyways. I would assume customers would wait in a tyre shop when they're waiting for the tyres to be changed or the wheels to be balanced, so you would be catching them at the right time.

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Bravo Azat!!!