Danny's Carwash: Bird droppings

good things come from above... my saying!

Nice.

It could be better without "Don't you hate when this happens?"

or with: "...when shit happens"?

maybe the bird droppings is the best way to express how awful the driver when their beloved car was dirty.

gooood I agree that you can cut the headline.everyone feel the same just see that shit.

copy cat shit is better.

first, you don't need the line, it's soooo redundant...
two, the big red logo tells me at a glance from 20 feet that it's advertising...
third... similar things have been done many times (stickers in cars for car washs and so on)..
fourth... this car wash must be owned by a millionaire cause the idea is not cheap at all...
fifth... don't you hate when someone puts any of that stuff in your car (specially glued stuff)?...
sixth... i think it's clear i don't think this idea is fresh, or original, or even well done.

myself and irene:
to much ...
two... third... ()....
please use just one .

i agree with you

Oh I bet Mike Liteman is stirring right now. He done did this a few years ago...

http://mikelightman.com/blog/index.php/test-book/