ahmed ragheb's picture
ahmed ragheb
297 pencils

lool I LIKE it too much !! bt poor COPY

nicoruk's picture
107 pencils

i agree. Cool idea, poor copy!

klaussnow's picture
1675 pencils

this is pretty cool, i'd say brush up on the photoshop executions in the others, this one is passable, and you've got a winner.

... its already been done...

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture
Jet Propulsion Lab
10679 pencils

There's nothing wrong with either line.
I think this is could be a great ambient or outdoor poster in real life.
People will be snapping photos in front of it for sure...

Nice student book piece. Well done.

chunkdude's picture
31 pencils

i should clarify, this is a campaign i did up in my book. im a student at humber college in toronto so yes theres been lots of obvious photoshopping, so please try to look past that at the idea and potential execution. thanks for the comments so far!

EDIT: to the first 2 posters, what about the copy makes it poor do you think?

ahmed ragheb's picture
ahmed ragheb
297 pencils

Coz it's not CATCHY !!! i think .. it needs smthn with ( (wutever) UR SELF ) or smthn that apoint u.. !!

kgeiger's picture
7287 pencils

And the copy in that comment really needs work... ;P
While the copy in the campaign is alright.

Steviec's picture
126 pencils

Good idea, but this one has been done for fare evasion ("Fare evasion is a crime") in Melbourne, Australia. I really like your soap idea though!

adgoddess's picture
369 pencils

Congratulations for the whole campaign project!

Chad's picture
441 pencils

Great alternative/ambient piece

Gabriellle's picture

I think the copy is good.
I'm always 'suspect' of those who comment that a piece of writing is poor, and yet are unable to suggest any ways in which to improve upon it.
The line is well crafted and completes the idea.

Guest's picture

Excuse me. There ain't no free lunches in this country. And don't go spending your whole life commiserating that you got raw deals. You've got to say, 'I think that if I keep working at this and want it bad enough I can have it.'
I am from Arabia and know bad English, give please true I wrote the following sentence: "Cheap car alarms, practicality at its finest."

:o Thanks in advance. Read.

RubixCube's picture
8 pencils

this is way better than the other ones!

Love the Line up concept.

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