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RubixCube's picture
RubixCube
Activity Score 8

this is way better than the other ones!

Love the Line up concept.

ahmed ragheb's picture
ahmed ragheb
Activity Score 297

lool I LIKE it too much !! bt poor COPY

nicoruk's picture
nicoruk
Activity Score 107

i agree. Cool idea, poor copy!

klaussnow's picture
klaussnow
Activity Score 1675

this is pretty cool, i'd say brush up on the photoshop executions in the others, this one is passable, and you've got a winner.

... its already been done...

Jet Propulsion Lab's picture
Jet Propulsion Lab
Activity Score 10679

There's nothing wrong with either line.
I think this is could be a great ambient or outdoor poster in real life.
People will be snapping photos in front of it for sure...

Nice student book piece. Well done.

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chunkdude
Activity Score 31

i should clarify, this is a campaign i did up in my book. im a student at humber college in toronto so yes theres been lots of obvious photoshopping, so please try to look past that at the idea and potential execution. thanks for the comments so far!

EDIT: to the first 2 posters, what about the copy makes it poor do you think?

ahmed ragheb's picture
ahmed ragheb
Activity Score 297

Coz it's not CATCHY !!! i think .. it needs smthn with ( (wutever) UR SELF ) or smthn that apoint u.. !!

kgeiger's picture
kgeiger
Activity Score 7287

And the copy in that comment really needs work... ;P
While the copy in the campaign is alright.

Steviec's picture
Steviec
Activity Score 126

Good idea, but this one has been done for fare evasion ("Fare evasion is a crime") in Melbourne, Australia. I really like your soap idea though!

adgoddess's picture
adgoddess
Activity Score 369

Congratulations for the whole campaign project!

Chad's picture
Chad
Activity Score 441

Great alternative/ambient piece

Gabriellle's picture
Gabriellle

I think the copy is good.
I'm always 'suspect' of those who comment that a piece of writing is poor, and yet are unable to suggest any ways in which to improve upon it.
The line is well crafted and completes the idea.

Guest's picture
Guest

Excuse me. There ain't no free lunches in this country. And don't go spending your whole life commiserating that you got raw deals. You've got to say, 'I think that if I keep working at this and want it bad enough I can have it.'
I am from Arabia and know bad English, give please true I wrote the following sentence: "Cheap car alarms, practicality at its finest."

:o Thanks in advance. Read.

RubixCube's picture
RubixCube
Activity Score 8

this is way better than the other ones!

Love the Line up concept.

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