There's nothing wrong with either line.
I think this is could be a great ambient or outdoor poster in real life.
People will be snapping photos in front of it for sure...
i should clarify, this is a campaign i did up in my book. im a student at humber college in toronto so yes theres been lots of obvious photoshopping, so please try to look past that at the idea and potential execution. thanks for the comments so far!
EDIT: to the first 2 posters, what about the copy makes it poor do you think?
Submitted by Gabriellle (not verified) on Thu, 2008-06-05 10:40.
I think the copy is good.
I'm always 'suspect' of those who comment that a piece of writing is poor, and yet are unable to suggest any ways in which to improve upon it.
The line is well crafted and completes the idea.
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lool I LIKE it too much !! bt poor COPY
i agree. Cool idea, poor copy!
this is pretty cool, i'd say brush up on the photoshop executions in the others, this one is passable, and you've got a winner.
There's nothing wrong with either line.
I think this is could be a great ambient or outdoor poster in real life.
People will be snapping photos in front of it for sure...
Nice student book piece. Well done.
i should clarify, this is a campaign i did up in my book. im a student at humber college in toronto so yes theres been lots of obvious photoshopping, so please try to look past that at the idea and potential execution. thanks for the comments so far!
EDIT: to the first 2 posters, what about the copy makes it poor do you think?
Coz it's not CATCHY !!! i think .. it needs smthn with ( (wutever) UR SELF ) or smthn that apoint u.. !!
And the copy in that comment really needs work... ;P
While the copy in the campaign is alright.
Good idea, but this one has been done for fare evasion ("Fare evasion is a crime") in Melbourne, Australia. I really like your soap idea though!
Congratulations for the whole campaign project!
Great alternative/ambient piece
I think the copy is good.
I'm always 'suspect' of those who comment that a piece of writing is poor, and yet are unable to suggest any ways in which to improve upon it.
The line is well crafted and completes the idea.