Cancer Council of Victoria: Mole

Cancer Council of Victoria: Mole

If you mole starts to feel like this see a doctor.

When the reader ran their fingers over the mole, it felt rough and raised in texture.

Advertising Agency: The Campaign Palace, Melbourne, Australia
Creative Director: Tony Leishman
Art Director: Ben Green
Copywriter: Pat Lennox
Account director: Jen Chin
Published: March 2008

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alvinpck's picture

Why there are two relatively similar copy? Both are saying the same thing.

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Best comment right off the bat! Best comment right off the bat!
No need to repeat the line twice. No need to repeat the line twice....

How they suppose to produce that 'mole' in real newspaper?

also should've been a comma after 'like this...'

Many newspapers have that "tear" at the bottom of every single sheet. I don't know why they do, but I have noticed it before. Like the ad before it with the colored (registration?) dots, this campaign is using the overlooked characteristics left over from the printing of the newspaper as part of their ads.

That said, it's a nice start, but they both could still use some work. Also, not sure anyone in a field unrelated to printing would understand the "color bar" one.

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