A! Body Tech Gym: Sentence
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Advertising Agency: MINHA, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
Creative Director: Renan Cristian
Art Director: Gabriel Cocchiarelli
Copywriter: Renan Correa
Other additional credits: Redson Silva
Released: June 2008


12 Comments
this is cool...props...but seems like only the front rows will really be able to read this.Maybe more ideas for placement. When I'm at the gym, I'm mostly watching the closed captions on a 38" television that's been suspended over everyone's head, I might put this on an entry way or hall way to the cardio machines, and bigger i think.
Good comment Le Douche
This is a spin class, so there aren't any TV's in the room. I do like the the idea of having this on the way to the general cardio machines though.
That's my first thought...
this is good insight.
I agree - should be bigger.
so fake...
This is too hard to read, even for the people in the front row. It's kinda ugly too.
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But the idea is great!
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I´m the copywriter and I say that is NOT fake.
I agree about the position. It could be in a better way.
And thanks about the praise of the idea. I hope most of all liked.
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