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SPOUT - THE SOFTEST GUM

Hi guys! The proposition for this gum is that this is the softest chewing gum. Though the idea is very obvious i tried to execute the same!! Your valuable comments please (specially for you ivan)

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ivan

Why especially me??? There are more talented creatives on the site than me. I'm just giving you guys the plaform to share your views.

I think the idea is great, but you need to execute it much better. This idea worth time and money to be spent on. Make the whole layout very very clean. Very clean and modern setting. Clean dentures, clean glass. Clean table. Overall, it's a great idea badly executed. Congrats anyway!

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geraldanith
Activity Score 97

The idea behind such an execution was to show real bathroom setup. Anyways your suggestions are valuable, wuill do a better job!!!

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ivan

Yes, but it looks dirty and disgusting. Does not fit to confectionary.

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Maitredeslettres
Activity Score 179

hey gerald, your ying yang idea is cool, but this dentures idea is done before for a confectionary brand. so, think of a better one that will put the old one to shame. best of luck.
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geraldanith
Activity Score 97

Thanx buddy! Will do my best!

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Austin Video Pr...
Activity Score 1310

Perhaps if you pulled the dentures and gum from the bathroom and placed them on an all white background. This would eliminate the dirty walls and draw more attention to the product.

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jteslik
Activity Score 1393

Stop resurrecting ancient threads, please. I can't tell if you're spamming or if you just don't know any better, but it's really annoying.

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sanjoo3d
Activity Score 41

very nice

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