89 pencils SPOUT - THE SOFTEST GUM
geraldanith 89 pencils | Wed, 2006-05-10 05:17
Hi guys! The proposition for this gum is that this is the softest chewing gum. Though the idea is very obvious i tried to execute the same!! Your valuable comments please (specially for you ivan)
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Why especially me??? There are more talented creatives on the site than me. I'm just giving you guys the plaform to share your views.
I think the idea is great, but you need to execute it much better. This idea worth time and money to be spent on. Make the whole layout very very clean. Very clean and modern setting. Clean dentures, clean glass. Clean table. Overall, it's a great idea badly executed. Congrats anyway!
The idea behind such an execution was to show real bathroom setup. Anyways your suggestions are valuable, wuill do a better job!!!
Yes, but it looks dirty and disgusting. Does not fit to confectionary.
hey gerald, your ying yang idea is cool, but this dentures idea is done before for a confectionary brand. so, think of a better one that will put the old one to shame. best of luck.
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Thanx buddy! Will do my best!
spout gum is the best gum iv ever chewed