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prevent female foeticide

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ivan's picture

Technically Eve was never a fetus. Am I wrong?

creativeworm's picture 53 pencils

hey ivan do tell me if the ad is working or not....

ivan's picture

You're right.

Well, I think the headline on it's own without the small subhead is enough. Maybe you can try to shorten the headline too. It's a bit spoonfed at the moment. The idea is there, but it's not delivered sharp enough. I like the art direction.

ashutosh's picture

hey ivan,
"technically" the ad doesn't talk of eve as foetus.....
check the premise dude and u'll be free of contradiction....

cheers..

ivan's picture

You're right, but it's nonsense. How can the first female fetus be the first being within a mother. Where did the mother come from? Anyway this discussion leads nowhere. Chicken? Egg?

Maitredeslettres's picture 179 pencils

Nope, you aren't wrong Ivan. It's bit too far fetched.
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creativeworm's picture 53 pencils

hey friend do tell me if the ad is working or not....

Maitredeslettres's picture 179 pencils

There's only one way to make an ad work. And that's REWORK.
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creativeworm's picture 53 pencils

true mam, but its working isnt it?

Maitredeslettres's picture 179 pencils

Rework, and make it work dude. You've got the idea. Nag it till it comes out completely.
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Creative420's picture

Ok,
First thing, you ad did create the 'Oh F$*@' reaction, but then again it's not making me do something about it. we are bunch of copywriters who've just viewed your ad and infact we've done something on foeticide too... so we go "He he, saale tu bhi paida nahin hua hota.. shayad advertising hi nahin hoti... shayad apna C$#%#$ CD bhi paida nahin hua hota..". So see, it made us all laugh.. and only did that. Fine, you may win your trip to Cannes, but you've gotto make it more effective. Something which might actually work. India is a society where we can debate out the crux or any situation... sorry dude.. dil pe mat lena.. and see if you have any other executions too then share it..

Well wisher.

creativeworm's picture 53 pencils

my well wisher or wishers,

thanks for two things.... 1. such a big comment 2. for your first reaction 'Oh F$*@'. will try for sure to coem out with more such creatives. n hey
ek servicing baanda yeh creative kaar raha hai. kuch socho.

keep writing n i will keep posting

sudi creativeworm

soms's picture 376 pencils

very funny ad not creative. well done.

ss

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