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Poverty

john5134 11 pencils | Tue, 2006-05-02 09:51

Any thoughts?

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ivan | Tue, 2006-05-02 12:37

I don't see an idea. It is too direct. Maybe you can twist it by signing the quotes. Like on this Economist ad.

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john5134 | Tue, 2006-05-02 12:46

Does the twist not come in the line of copy at the bottom?

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john5134 | Tue, 2006-05-02 12:48

And if not, does anyone have any suggestions on the signature twist?

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ivan | Tue, 2006-05-02 12:48

Well. In a way yes. But it's not strong enough in my opinion. Let's see what others will say...

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john5134 | Tue, 2006-05-02 14:47

Anyone?

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john5134 | Wed, 2006-05-03 09:08

Ivan, thanks for the comments. I've been struggling with these ads. I do think they're a little straight. What does everyone else think? Any suggestions?

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Guest | Mon, 2006-05-08 06:46

well john th idea is at a nascent stage. ur getting thr revisit ur
brief too. th idea does not manage to extract a reaction 4m me.

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