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Poverty

Any thoughts?

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ivan

I don't see an idea. It is too direct. Maybe you can twist it by signing the quotes. Like on this Economist ad.

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john5134
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Does the twist not come in the line of copy at the bottom?

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And if not, does anyone have any suggestions on the signature twist?

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ivan

Well. In a way yes. But it's not strong enough in my opinion. Let's see what others will say...

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john5134
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Anyone?

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john5134
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Ivan, thanks for the comments. I've been struggling with these ads. I do think they're a little straight. What does everyone else think? Any suggestions?

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