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Kills odour

was working on Fa Deodorant...came up with this long time ago...

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tackynut
Activity Score 30

WOW! Did u made this in MS Paint..! really ost effective!

ivan's picture
ivan

The idea is good. Very funny. But the execution is very poor. Please work on the art direction.

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murthy
Activity Score 233

nice idea!

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Austin Video Pr...
Activity Score 1274

I think this is very clever.

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Kathp29
Activity Score 33

I agree, I am into this concept, even a little better visual would really help.

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jteslik
Activity Score 1393

This post is very old, but as long as this is getting feedback anyway, I'll just mention that the concept doesn't read right. You're trying to say that the deodorant is like a grenade that will kill odors. I read it opposite, like the odor is so bad it's like a stink bomb about to go off. An idea that's more specific/executed differently might help clarify. But I still think there's a better way to say "Kills Odor" without getting too literal.

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