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Good idea and nice execution.

A few thoughts, however. I think the drinks and the tagline need to be a bit bigger. Maybe like 20% to 30% bigger. You've got the space, so put the product in it.

Also, what's with the football and the baseball stadium behind it, shouldn't that be a baseball instead? Check your vanishing points and perspectives on the shots, sometimes what you have done in photoshop would never be possible.

You also need to cut down on unnecessary information. The first two are incredibly busy with a lot going on in terms of the city or countryside, and the most successful of all them is the discus because in it's simplicity you get the message immediately.

very nice ideas!

Thanks murthy.

seen these before. first thoughts. In fact the ones I saw were better. Clouds with holes made by the ball.
there is also one with newspaper boy TVC/ paper lands in the balcony, guy looks down, he is on some 50th floor and down there is the newspaper boy. come on kids be original.

Desi
www.DesiCreative.com

the idea is good (regardless it's your original or stolen),
but the graphic is poor ! Very much like primary school students learn how to use photoshop, copy and paste layers then crop it. Do it properly... pay attention to colours and lights, it's not only about putting pictures together.

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