ok it seems that this has quite clearly been done but il still comment non the less.
Logo is too big, why in the third ad does it move, this ruins the cohesion of the campaign.
Why have you used arial rounded, surely there would be a more appropriate typeface on first glance id presume a more clinical san serif type font, would be better as pointing out these ex thieves is almost like a documentary tone of voice.
Also the copy is flat as a pancake. 'Ex thief' Its lacking any punch for me.
The pickpocket one is closer, maybe put the name and something more specific they were caught for, or something better than that.
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wtf..........dont copy ideas man.....
show me.....the link
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This is a TVC done by SBI for the launch of their debit cards. And it's the EXACT same idea.
http://www.thehindubusinessline.com/catalyst/2006/04/06/images/2006040...
ok it seems that this has quite clearly been done but il still comment non the less.
Logo is too big, why in the third ad does it move, this ruins the cohesion of the campaign.
Why have you used arial rounded, surely there would be a more appropriate typeface on first glance id presume a more clinical san serif type font, would be better as pointing out these ex thieves is almost like a documentary tone of voice.
Also the copy is flat as a pancake. 'Ex thief' Its lacking any punch for me.
The pickpocket one is closer, maybe put the name and something more specific they were caught for, or something better than that.
www.bahonsadvertising.co.uk
thanx.
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Nice !
Thanx himanshu,i needed this comment.
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Is Microsoft cool with your client using their Trademarked name?
I don't Know about Mocrosoft will get cool or anytrhing else.
Thats not my matter.
My work is Emphasis the product in Cluttered Market.
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