ziploc bag ad pls critique

My attemp on copy writing, pls critic

ziploc bag ad pls critique

2 comments

klaussnow's picture
klaussnow
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Needs an image, or your line is a letdown.

... its already been done...

ivan's picture
ivan

I like the thought very much. I think it lends itself to a before and after pun with two images exactly the same.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

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