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tagline : for better vision
Photo/art/copy : self
guys...i need feedback pls...shud this camp go in my book??
I don't really understand the ads. Sorry
Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW
they're simple ivan... the keys are dropped instead of being on the key-holder...etc mistakes that are caused due to blurred vision
~ old habits die hard, older ones never do ~
The idea is there but the executions are pretty weak.
There's something i like about the 4th one, maybe because its more subtle than the rest.
Better executions/art direction is needed, thats for sure.
m a copywriter... will try to do whatever i can with these...thanks!
The idea is too literal. And I won't mention the art direction. This route (mistakes because of poor vision) has been done so much better so many times. Medical cream on a toothbrush springs to mind. Keep thinking as this is too basic to get you a job. -- Nick
hey mate, d ads need an art Directr right away. d 4th one has some thing abt it...others will be banal for both CDs n targets.
my word: keep it miles away from your book.
thanx guys... anyone els...? pixel, modal, wghtr, TRICKY ??
i like 1 and 4 u see i wear glasses and if i dont i have em i get the same problem some times
i have these problems even with my glasses on my face maybe its my rasta dealer's stuff ?
sometimes its alcohool
over all its true
i am sure its just a thumbnail of an idea well go on work a little work on the art direction ;p
The man who stops advertising to save money is like the man who stops the clock to save time
that makes me feel so much better..phew! thanx, i'll rework them a bit...
the 4th one is really good...
- The trick to forgetting the big picture is to look at everything close-up.
I also like ad 1 and 4, I think that ad 1 would work better if the keys where more jumbled up against the wall. Would give it a more realistic approach.
i do like the idea. yeah it's pretty simple., but i smirked a bit at them. just not at #2. I don't know what i'm not seeing in this one, and i don't need glasses. i would stick with 1, 3 and 4 and work them out a bit better visually.
good sugesstions guys...thanx!
I liked the 4th one.