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always remember, in a jewelery ad if you are
not showing jewels,
not showing a woman who needs to be treated like a princess that she is (from your copy),
YOU BETTER CHOOSE A FONT THATS WORTHY
AND PLEASE FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE LEARN TO KERN.
Ok i know my font sucks (i didn't use any fancy program so i can't get creative) but i put the spacing like that for a reason. I didn't want it to look like a paragraph, if it's written like this it's something different and most likely it will be read. I wanted the 'princess' and 'she is' to stand out and in bold (couldn't bold just those 3 words), as a conclusion that 'she is a princess'. And i didn't think i would need to put a piece of jewelry since she has something on her ear...that gives out it's a jewelry store
... Why not? Who says she's a princess?
I got no reason to buy this product and no reason to choose it over another.
What's in it for me?
Well, the main purpose we buy stuff for our girls is to make them feel special, like a princess...hoping to get laid! but you can't put that on an ad!
You buy her gifts because you love her... The two of you have sex because you love each other... If you are paying to get laid... You are with a prostitute... Correct me if i'm wrong...
BFB the whole point is that buying jewelry from that store will make the girl special....that's the reason we buy stuff for girls anyways..and you kinda HAVE to buy from there if feel your girl deserves to be treated as a princess (that's what girls think)
Everybody knows jewelry makes women feel special. They don't need you to say so. I know I can get laid if I buy my GF jewelry (Though I'd like to believe I'm not in a stage I need to bribe for sex. yet). What you need to do is either make me laugh or tell me something I didn't know. Convince me in some way. This doesn't convince me.
If you have to explain your ad like this, it's obviously not working.
NOW SHUT UP AND LEARN!
Hey, I don't like this as much as the next fellow but why so agressive?
He needs to stop defending his work. Especially at this stage in his career -- and with work this bad.
Lol.. I agree with bebe. Our world is harsh. But folks who swim it... swim it. :)
Cheers
Lol.. I agree with bebe. Our world is harsh. But folks who swim it... swim it. :)
Cheers
Lol.. I agree with bebe. Our world is harsh. But folks who swim it... swim it. :)
Cheers
I understand you are limited because you dont have extra fonts, but your reasoning that spacing the words get read is wrong. I suggest you take those critics on your page seriously. Try reading advertising layout books.
Cheers
not working. everybody knows jewelry makes girls feel special. It's just a picture of a girl, with a copyline telling me nothing new.
Please never set your type like this again.
The concept would be stronger with no image.
Just very compelling, smart headlines that appeal
to both women and men.
Of course you don't just have to set the headlines
on a solid black background. Make them special.
Possibly make use of unique, delicate details.
WHERE IS THE STRATEGY?
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