You'll need it

You'll need it

You'll need it

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JAGGY's picture
JAGGY
1382 pencils

Cool idea, but the execution didn't make me struggle enough to get a pain anywhere. Try different executions, eg.. maybe a spiraling text string, just an idea. Once someone asked someone, "What is animation? Is it shaking objects on screen?" Someone replied, "No. It is shaking the audience watching it."

Give me pain, take my money.

Jaggy, MICA Ahmedabad

wearmysocks's picture
wearmysocks
1085 pencils

I like the concept, but you should rewrite the copy. It's not very compelling, and has a few grammatical errors. "She bended again" and "more closer" both feel quite clunky.
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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.

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Energizer Bunny arrested, charged with battery.

capton john's picture
capton john
640 pencils

thanks dear I'll improve execution & copy.

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neelwassunnyboy001's picture
neelwassunnyboy001
116 pencils

good one yaar aur kuch naya kiya hai is baar,

Think Again
Neel Alone

CreatEve's picture
CreatEve
508 pencils

Hey nice one.. but execution pats need work..
i love the concept..
keep on
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"Consumer is not a Moron; she is your Wife"

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"I am what I was before, now I want to be what I am not"

sonygeorge's picture
sonygeorge
123 pencils

gud concept...keep it up!!!

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