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JAGGY's picture
JAGGY
Activity Score 1382

Cool idea, but the execution didn't make me struggle enough to get a pain anywhere. Try different executions, eg.. maybe a spiraling text string, just an idea. Once someone asked someone, "What is animation? Is it shaking objects on screen?" Someone replied, "No. It is shaking the audience watching it."

Give me pain, take my money.

Jaggy, MICA Ahmedabad

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wearmysocks
Activity Score 1085

I like the concept, but you should rewrite the copy. It's not very compelling, and has a few grammatical errors. "She bended again" and "more closer" both feel quite clunky.
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capton john
Activity Score 640

thanks dear I'll improve execution & copy.

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neelwassunnyboy001
Activity Score 116

good one yaar aur kuch naya kiya hai is baar,

Think Again
Neel Alone

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CreatEve
Activity Score 508

Hey nice one.. but execution pats need work..
i love the concept..
keep on
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sonygeorge
Activity Score 123

gud concept...keep it up!!!

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