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badger71, We stil have the same problems here:
To much Photos
Logo have no impact
And the copy is not ready yet.
You have the Idea but it is not there, I undersand that you want to give the sence of freedom and power but I am sure that your target grup does´t need an
ad that is complicated an the copy says that you dont want them to have your yacht, let them do wath ever they want, you want to sell your products.
I sincerly think that you need a much more fresh and easy art with a new copy to get a better impact.
over complicated
You keep posting just slight variations on what you originally did. You've got to start over from scratch. Your strategy is too generic, so you're just promoting the category, and badly too.
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