XXXX da bomb

Hey, I need some feed back on this one. I'm not sur if the visual is clear enough.

XXXX da bomb

17 comments

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Not quite sure what you're trying to say. The visual makes the head of the beer look disgusting. I feel that if you are simply showing a bomb style beer head then you should stop right there and rethink. J

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

Yeah it's supposed to show an atomic bomb (for a strong beer). I was afraid the visual wasn't clear enough.

Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
1475 pencils

Think, what is the relevance of an Atomic bomb and a weak Australian lager. One kills thousands of innocent civilians, the other quenches the thirst of a few Aussies. Remember "Truth wel Told". Find an interesting truth about how people interact with fosters then tell it very well. J

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

Good advice.
The idea was "a beer thats blows your mind", but you are probably right, before doing it, I wasn't sure if I should use the idea for a strong beer or an anti-alcohol campaign. I'll try to use it for that instead ("alcohol kills 200 000 people every day" or something like that)

flyingstag's picture
flyingstag
76 pencils

Interesting visual. I'd suggest dropping the
'da bomb' copy as it doesn't really add anything
(we can all see that the beer looks like an atomic
explosion!)

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

ok thanks, i really need more feed back on this one cause i get alot of different opinions on this one, and i'm not sure if i should keep it or not.

weighter's picture
weighter
744 pencils

Yeah definitely lose the 'da bomb baby'.

If there were some other way to nail the mushroom cloud visual without making the head look so unappealing then I think this would be a great ad for your book, very on-strategy... ads miss that quality that oh so often.

parry bedi's picture
parry bedi
32 pencils

nice thot .. but u can make another in the series... instead of the bomb smoke cloude.. make a punching fist.... might work as well... ! keep rulin ;)

keep rulin' :)

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

Funny you should say that because i'm actually working on the fist ! hehe

atulspande's picture
atulspande
182 pencils

yes i am fully agree with Stigset.

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

on what point ?

leftfield's picture
leftfield
165 pencils

The idea is so appaulling and so badly done there's no where to begin.

Maybe you could begin by staying away from anything creative

sanjib roy's picture
sanjib roy
13 pencils

nice gork i like it

fersvax's picture
fersvax
1237 pencils

I like it, the mushroom should be smaller, and don't put text over the glass, it's distracting. "Da bomb baby" is not necesary, just the image and "The Strongest beer" would make it better.

FER.

Stigset's picture
Stigset
1456 pencils

Thanks, but I got a lot of comments on not associating alcohol and a nuclear bomb, so I might use it for an anti alohol campaign . What do you think?

fersvax's picture
fersvax
1237 pencils

Boring. Don't pay attention to that comments.

FER.

ladylee's picture
ladylee
223 pencils

I like idea but the foam looks reallyl really fake

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