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XXXX da bomb

Hey, I need some feed back on this one. I'm not sur if the visual is clear enough.

XXXX da bomb
Conceptual-eyes's picture
Conceptual-eyes
Activity Score 1475

Not quite sure what you're trying to say. The visual makes the head of the beer look disgusting. I feel that if you are simply showing a bomb style beer head then you should stop right there and rethink. J

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Yeah it's supposed to show an atomic bomb (for a strong beer). I was afraid the visual wasn't clear enough.

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Conceptual-eyes
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Think, what is the relevance of an Atomic bomb and a weak Australian lager. One kills thousands of innocent civilians, the other quenches the thirst of a few Aussies. Remember "Truth wel Told". Find an interesting truth about how people interact with fosters then tell it very well. J

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Good advice.
The idea was "a beer thats blows your mind", but you are probably right, before doing it, I wasn't sure if I should use the idea for a strong beer or an anti-alcohol campaign. I'll try to use it for that instead ("alcohol kills 200 000 people every day" or something like that)

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flyingstag
Activity Score 76

Interesting visual. I'd suggest dropping the
'da bomb' copy as it doesn't really add anything
(we can all see that the beer looks like an atomic
explosion!)

Stigset's picture
Stigset
Activity Score 1454

ok thanks, i really need more feed back on this one cause i get alot of different opinions on this one, and i'm not sure if i should keep it or not.

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weighter
Activity Score 744

Yeah definitely lose the 'da bomb baby'.

If there were some other way to nail the mushroom cloud visual without making the head look so unappealing then I think this would be a great ad for your book, very on-strategy... ads miss that quality that oh so often.

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parry bedi
Activity Score 32

nice thot .. but u can make another in the series... instead of the bomb smoke cloude.. make a punching fist.... might work as well... ! keep rulin ;)

keep rulin' :)

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Funny you should say that because i'm actually working on the fist ! hehe

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atulspande
Activity Score 180

yes i am fully agree with Stigset.

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Stigset
Activity Score 1454

on what point ?

leftfield's picture
leftfield
Activity Score 165

The idea is so appaulling and so badly done there's no where to begin.

Maybe you could begin by staying away from anything creative

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sanjib roy
Activity Score 13

nice gork i like it

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fersvax
Activity Score 1239

I like it, the mushroom should be smaller, and don't put text over the glass, it's distracting. "Da bomb baby" is not necesary, just the image and "The Strongest beer" would make it better.

FER.

Stigset's picture
Stigset
Activity Score 1454

Thanks, but I got a lot of comments on not associating alcohol and a nuclear bomb, so I might use it for an anti alohol campaign . What do you think?

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fersvax
Activity Score 1239

Boring. Don't pay attention to that comments.

FER.

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ladylee
Activity Score 223

I like idea but the foam looks reallyl really fake

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