Sorry, this is too shallow. Anything could crash into a door. Ok, so it's something long... A 2x4, a christmas tree, a blow up girlfriend, a surfboard, etc., etc., etc. I agree that pinnochio is a bit more interesting, but keep thinking.
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brandon
Nice the way it is (ofcourse I would not intellectualize it too much). Broken glass window will kill the whole concept if you wanna show a clean layout that shows a spotless clean window without showing the window.
No connection. Just a cute image with a little visual joke. I don't think the average consumer will make that connection. Also this was the first ad I ever wrote about 3 years ago! Just found it and thought I'd post it. Thanks Everyone
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Sorry, this is too shallow. Anything could crash into a door. Ok, so it's something long... A 2x4, a christmas tree, a blow up girlfriend, a surfboard, etc., etc., etc. I agree that pinnochio is a bit more interesting, but keep thinking.
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brandon
Sorry... do you mean keep thinking of something else to crash into the window or to change the concept completley? Thanks Nick
why not a broken glass instead of broken nose, etc ? :)
I thought that broken glass would make the consumer think negative connotations. A broken nose is funny, broken window is just a bit of a nuisance.
I think it's a nice simple execution, nothing groundbreaking with the thought, just nice
I like it
Nice the way it is (ofcourse I would not intellectualize it too much). Broken glass window will kill the whole concept if you wanna show a clean layout that shows a spotless clean window without showing the window.
Desi
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Pinocchio is associated with liars. What's the connection to Windex?
No connection. Just a cute image with a little visual joke. I don't think the average consumer will make that connection. Also this was the first ad I ever wrote about 3 years ago! Just found it and thought I'd post it. Thanks Everyone
Not a good idea for your book. People have scammed this area to death and this one is only about a 5 out of 10. Try another category.
Are you kidding me?
I like the idea.... though poorly executed.
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