Viagra Wedding

I'm sorry, but I don't like this at all. It wouldn't be funny even if the artwork was ok.

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Draw a circle. Then, step out of it.

Thanks for the comment but I would appreciate a more in depth critic. Thanks:)

It is too direct. Yes, viagra gives back your virility, but you need to show it in a smart unexpected way. You can only be more direct if you actually show an erect penis.

I agree with Ivan and nubloo. If you wanna go on with the "Viagra wedding" concept, maybe you could use the wedding cake figures, having sex behind the altar of the cake, with only their legs showing from the side of the altar. I don't know, I'm just writing out loud.

Besides, Viagra, Condoms, Heinz, Playstation... We should try to choose more everyday-life, regular products. It's easy to pull a Viagra ad (well, that's not always the case, as we can see here), but is it easy to pull a good vacuum cleanr ad? If it's good, it's even worthier.

Regards.

Thanks ;)... got it.

seriously... dont do a viagra ad.. they are over done by every student in the world. i mean if you are doing it for fun.. totally go ahead.. but if you are a student or are planing on putting this ad in your book then stop.. its not gonna impress anybody that you can do an ad for viagra.. its once of the easiest clients to do something funny for.. just saying..

viagra ads are over done by every student in the world. i mean if you are doing it for fun.. totally go ahead.. but if you are a student or are planing on putting this ad in your book then stop.. its not gonna impress anybody that you can do an ad for viagra.. its once of the easiest clients to do something funny for.. just saying..

I really don't like this either. It doesn't say anything special about the product. I mean, anyone of the girls age can have an erection.

Stick with what Marucuturu said. We all should try different clients. Afterall, it's gonna take a whuile before we make real ads for Viagra, PlayStation, Guinness, Wonderbra...
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I love the whole idea!

............@Marcelo G

Mind you viagra aint for girls.it shows she choose to marry the old timer because he still gets his groove up.

For the rest of you

at weddings a bride should have
something old
something new
something borrowed
something BLUE!

Brilliant concept......nice job.

are you serious?

I would take into consideration what someone said about not doing a viagra ad but I think this is actually pretty funny, it seems like some of the others aren't getting it (maybe lost in translation). There is a twist to it you goofballs!

esosa is right! It's known that there are four things a bride should always have at a wedding...something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue... now...maybe I could have done something different and more innovative, that's what we all strive for. However, I was aiming for something easy to remember and associate... may have failed by applying a local saying to a global product... but that's just life...real life... anyhow, thanks esosa for the comments and for making the association that I was looking for.

I do, however, agree that the artwork bites...but that's not my area of expertise and I popped this out in and hour (tops!)... I just come up with the creative concept and application of the idea...the designer comes up with the artwork... but I will keep an eye on everything everyone said...thanks for the feedback!

dude! no need to get so serious... maybe I need to specify... this ad isn't part of a portfolio nor is it isn't part of any real campaign...it's me...one day, a year ago wanting to test myself out...alone. I wanted to know if I was capable of coming up with a creative concept ON MY OWN. I don't know if everyone in this forum works for some big fancy-shmacey ad agency, but where I come from a lot of advertising students end-up working on their own for very small companies. Most of which ask for nothing more than business cards to be printed up. So yeah... I am one of those many students that had potential in school but ended up staying in a small town and not having much to work with. I spent years like that...so...one day I came across this site and thought... why not see if I can come up with something...something quick (cuz I had other stuff to do, like teach and print-up business cards) so I did... I pumped out 3 or four ads in a couple of hours and uploaded them to test myself out. I didn't work with any designer and as for working in a team. I do a great job at that seeing as how I supervise a content team for an e-commerce company and have a great relationship with my team members. So....don't get all bent out of shape for something I said. I didn't give a long ass explanation cuz didn't think it was necessary..until you posted. Why tell you my story?...I just thought it was understood that I didn't take time in the design part cuz it's not my strong side and would hope to be lucky enough to work on that with a designer or someone with more graphic knowledge than me. So... don't feel offended or appalled...I was just testing out my abilities and trying to see what it was I wanted in MY life...I just thought this site was a great place for ANYONE with a creative need to put their creation out there and get feedback...so, dude! lighten up!

I like the idea, it's funny for creatives to watch it, but for the clients a little offensive.
But I like it. ^_^ Dare to do all that's in your head when you are learning.