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this are some teasers, i came up for a sch project which is targeting kids on saving water. The headlines are basic anwsers from kids, this will eventually lead to a series of collaterals and activity for this self intiated campaign.



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A lot of this technic being used for art. There is no idea in these. You are only stating the obvious. You need to give folks a reason to care, right now there is none.

Don't spend time on "teaser ads" they always need follow up to figure out the idea (if in fact there is one). If your going to do it at least include the resolve ad so people can see how it is supposed to work.

Students tend to use the phrase "teaser ad" when they have an execution searching for an idea. Get the idea first.

Try not. Do or do not. There is no try.

agree with CC3 this is a search for an idea, not an idea itself. Its a shallow 3 minutes chat about the brief with your partner.

Think first, write second, produce thrid.

i think its cool...
i like it...

Ali Behzad

TRICKY's picture

i see a big need of a lot of water above their head is this what you are trying to convey ?

ivan's picture

I like the illustration, but I'm not convinced about the message.

if water is disappearing so the ads shud look little serious,infact appearance of the ads are funny n difficult to understand n it does not contain idea too.u did hard work for this but i think u shud concentrate on idea generation first.

Thanks guys. I concur with ur comments, i guess I have to improve on this weakness of emphasising only on the asthetics only.

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