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RUBBISH
RUBBISH
RUBBISH
RUBBISH
Hu Tabweer you only learned Rub.. or anything. we are here for learning and getting some suggestion to improve oyr ad. Only Rub.. words cant improve..So dear think before on your valuable comment
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Hi Tanweer you only learned Rub.. or anything else. we are here for learning and getting some suggestion to improve our ad. Only Rub.. words cant improve..So dear think before on your valuable comment
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Okay... comments.
Nothing is connected here. The image doesnt move to the headline which doesnt move to the signature. There's no flow to the layout, just things put on the page in a marginally interesting way, with little regard for weight and placement. The blue type against the purple background doesnt work, and the spacing in the signature varies from word to word.
Conceptually, there's nothing here to work with. The red ribbon is nice, but it's not *doing* anything (Yes, I know that red ribbons are the symnbol of AIDS work, but how does its insertion here *do* anything for your ad?).
Really, not to sound harsh, but this isnt an ad. It needs far too much work.
SeanMartin, I have taken the AIDS ribbon to make the Condom Shape in to "A" which is initial letter of both name. As far color is concern, i am understanding the colors mix up and typography.
thanks for your valuable comment,i need your comment in my future ads too..
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This ad fundamentally flawed and therefore cannot be saved by tweaks to typography, copy or colour scheme. The best advice I can give you is to start again from scratch. When you do start again, try setting yourself a different brief, avoiding such cliches as Tabasco, Nike etc, and choosing a product that is less commonly associated with award-winning work.
Don't flog a dead horse. One of the first things to learn as a creative is when to cut your losses and start over.
It's not supposed to be easy.
Octogon, thanks but you knw? i m just trying my level best. coz i am not workin professional.
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maybe Disruption isnt that strong in layouting the elements to make a good ad, sorry i also dont wanna sound harsh on you Disruption but in this section all words and comments are expected since we are judging quality and concepts, nothing personal against anyone, so dont take it personal :D just sit relaxed and rework your ad probably get an assistance from an experienced guy to enlighten you more on how to arrange your elements once your doing an ad but not before cracking a good concept...
take it easy and enjoy :)
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Everartz
Thanks Everartz.. yah i am working on it. For the learning process thatas y i am posting my ad. One thing i have no any traned guy so i think copy and Visualization my self.. and i learn through by you people commentsss,,,,
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obviously improved from previous ads but needs too much work. Think more on concept & try to give some unique. The blue color of font i didn't liked. but as i sayed improvements are visible which shows your progress.
all the best
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thank dear... do comment like that what is right n what is wrong...
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