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Hi, i need more comments on this two series ad. Thanks.



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i'd work on the first visual, that got potential and makes sense. the gravestone doesn't really. you don't have to put a cross on the coffin though, i think. I'd do a fake unapproved can and just shape it coffin like. and work on the copy. now basically your're just saying what you show. but once the viewer is interested, he longs for more information. a really short copy on the subject would do.

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I've read copy but still I want to know about brand.

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dont get it beacuus of i dont know the brand. plz give some inforamation abt the brand also.

this scamp ads is actually for World Health Organization (WHO). A public message.
Buy Canned foods that approved by health ministry. Buy unapproved canned foods will harm your health. :)