Submitted by scottshepard on Thu, 2008-09-11 19:58.
HA! I've been told to go to hell while on my cell phone...then I pressed the red button.
Enough comedy from me.
I think this one did a nose dive. I confuse easy, I don't get this one.
I can see it is an Initial concept.
Take care of the Fonts in the Final. Needs Strong Bold for Attention.
Can have better Copy... altough you can try this, if you want.
[Screen actually has a number calling]
[Call butn] Answer to *Break loose Hell. (*try pun 'Brake')
[reject butn] Cancel for Peace.
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HAHA, so if i drive and use my phone I GO TO HELL?
not clear to me, its not adding any value to the "threat" of using of the cell phone while driving...try harder...
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Everartz
Ummm....
My phone - Green for answer. red for hang up: opposite to what this is.
www.creativeduck.blogspot.com
red is for bad and green is for good.
thats good...i like it
love anything creative
http://addot.blogspot.com/
Is there anything you don't like?
Green is for answering the phone, so answering the phone whilst driving is good, and hanging up is bad?
www.creativeduck.blogspot.com
thats the idea there.
the green coloured button there is a cancel button....
which says if u cancel the call,ur life is safe.....
love anything creative
http://addot.blogspot.com/
But that's all wrong! Green - answer, so this ad wants me to answer the phone for life? No logic in that.
Regardless of that, it's still not working.
www.creativeduck.blogspot.com
forget all about color, the idea itself doesn't fly. hang it and move on.
that's a no from me
"I have no friends, and don't want any." - Michelangelo
from me too
HA! I've been told to go to hell while on my cell phone...then I pressed the red button.
Enough comedy from me.
I think this one did a nose dive. I confuse easy, I don't get this one.
Best Regards,
Scott Shepard
www.scottshepardphotography.com
www.scottshepardphotography.blogspot.com
I can see it is an Initial concept.
Take care of the Fonts in the Final. Needs Strong Bold for Attention.
Can have better Copy... altough you can try this, if you want.
[Screen actually has a number calling]
[Call butn] Answer to *Break loose Hell. (*try pun 'Brake')
[reject butn] Cancel for Peace.
Lets see what you come up with.
A Bad Ad can B an AD... If corrected correctly. (~_^)
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