Toyota Fliers - Just layout

Toyota Fliers - Just layout
Toyota Fliers - Just layout


ivan's picture

Cool cars. The great photos speak for themselves. I would try some cool rough background though. Maybe jungle for one, desert for the other and snow for the third.

Ivan Raszl, admin of AotW

pixelbomb1's picture
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I did but my boss said he wants a white background. Thanks!

Arnold Santillan

esotericusername's picture
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I would try a concept. It's all the rage.

Advertainment's picture
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Why don't you try something like a small concept, toyota Vs toyota just a suggestion!

RobMc's picture
243 pencils

well i like the layout and the way you change the direction of the vehicles to move the viewers eye. i think thats what you were wanting critique on because it sounds like they pretty much know what they want.

TRICKY's picture
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Ian Meldrum's picture
Ian Meldrum
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I think they lok clean and suitable for a showroom brochure style mag, But for a public ad they need that extra aesthetic value that you see on so many car ads these days... but you've got a boss to please ain't you. Im not sure about the first ones text to car relation. top right car is close to two sets of specs... Works lovely in the second one though.

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