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Toro Leaf Blowers
Submitted by aspiring_creative on Wed, 2008-02-27 19:33.
Ad for Toro Leaf Blowers. Does the visual work? What about the copy?
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it's funny, i think the sperm-like-clouds can also be removed.
and remove both ''the''s in the headline.
Hahaha. You are the second person to mention the "spem-like" clouds are a bit confusing. I was trying to show the nostril smoke common when animating an angry bull, but your are right, I either need to lose them or portray them more accuratley, less defined maybe.
Thank you for the feedback.
Maybe it should read "Mess with Toro get the horns"...
You can't remove the "the"s as this is a play on the phrase "you mess with THE bull, you get THE horns" so if you remove them the connection will be that much harder to get.
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layout is too busy, lose the leaves in the background, its a leafblower, i dont need you to show me leaves. try a white background with just the leafblowers as horns, drop the body copy, the intimidate mother nature bit of it, awful typography, dnt mean to be harsh but get rid of it.
I don't think you need to make it about the phrase, the horns visual is interesting enough to engage me, i think its a nice image.
your copy could either just read as straight copy "toro leafblowers are tougher than the rest"
or play on the bull idea more with "charge your leaves away with toro"
or maybe if your stretching it places where they have bulls, not sure what its called, the ring where they do the bullfighting with the matador.
"Theres no leaves in the _________"
or "theres no leaves in Pamplona"
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