comment pls...on the idea not on the layout....(u know how the layout will look when the copy
guy make it himself)

Sick-of-adS's picture
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very weak line :s.. work on it.. the visuals could be better too

Desi's picture
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Weak. If you line is we DRY YOU, then you could come up with better visuals.
Perhaps you could show a flood?

drunk dave's picture
drunk dave
Activity Score 1066

You're kidding with your advice of course. God help us if you're not.

adabortion's picture
Activity Score 615

Or maybe say "GO, GET WET"!?! You'll need to dramatize the visuals a few more folds, mate.

popdistortion's picture
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I think the most difficult thing to avoid for students is the so called Show-and-Tell syndrome or STS. I suffered from it as well. Very serious.
Have recovered though. Feeling a lot better now.
You have an idea lurking there. You just have to pull it out.