It's a good solid idea, and it's nice to be bold and use examples such as the Kennedy assassination, however you canbarely read it t all, which is intrigueing as its so light it would suggest there was a reason for it???? If so it's lost on me.
I would darken the backdrop. Other than that its ace! Nice one!
Thanks~ the only problem i have is that nobody use their liquid paper on colour paper.. erm.. thats why i try to lighten the background. supposingly the background was suggested to be white... but it looks plain as a campaign.. what do u suggest?
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good concept.. nice..
Hey, thanks. glad you like it
Pretty good.. keep it up.
Nice. Talk about speak of the devil.
Thanks
Good idea. I'd consider using darker colors as the background to make the lines pop out more but good job.
Can't read it.
You need more contrast between your text, and the background.
Like the concept.
Thanks guys for the feedbacks.
It's a good solid idea, and it's nice to be bold and use examples such as the Kennedy assassination, however you canbarely read it t all, which is intrigueing as its so light it would suggest there was a reason for it???? If so it's lost on me.
I would darken the backdrop. Other than that its ace! Nice one!
Thanks~ the only problem i have is that nobody use their liquid paper on colour paper.. erm.. thats why i try to lighten the background. supposingly the background was suggested to be white... but it looks plain as a campaign.. what do u suggest?
You could maybe try doing it on lined paper?
erm.. pretty good idea. will try on that, thanks~
Coulda be better